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Birthday blessing
EuniceYeoh (1)

I know very very little of python only, but I’ve made this with python for my friend as a birthday gift. Can anyone tell me how to improve it, either how to use loop to make the code shorter or any new idea I can add in. The words I type inside are in Chinese sorry for any inconvenience but still thank you!

2 months ago
Answered by OldWizard209 (1538) [earned 5 cycles]
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OldWizard209 (1538)

This is really amazing but very very repetitive. There are ways you can improve this. For example with every for loop, you can just create a function:

def print_out(list_name):
    for x in list_name :
        time.sleep(0.3)
        print(x)

print_out(cake2)
print_out(cake3)
print_out(cake4)
... # so on
2 months ago
EuniceYeoh (1)

@OldWizard209 omg thank you i will do the correction as much as possible. Thank you！！

2 months ago
OldWizard209 (1538)

Would mind marking my answer as correct? @EuniceYeoh

1 month ago
EuniceYeoh (1)

sure！@OldWizard209

1 month ago
btfuss (177)

That's so sweet! Maybe add a rainbow birthday instead of one color.

2 months ago
EuniceYeoh (1)

@btfuss ok i will try to do that as soon as possible thanks！

2 months ago